YOU SAID:

Day is done, gone the sun.

INTO JAPANESE

日が終わった、太陽が消えた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

The day is over, the sun is gone.

INTO JAPANESE

その日は終わり、太陽は消えた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

The day was over and the sun was gone.

INTO JAPANESE

その日は終わり、太陽は消えていた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

The day was over and the sun was gone.