YOU SAID:
Gordon raised his head, alarmed.
INTO JAPANESE
ゴードンは頭を上げて驚いた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Gordon raised his head and was surprised.
INTO JAPANESE
ゴードンは頭を上げて驚いた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Gordon raised his head and was surprised.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.