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Hanging in the metallic fog, a moment before the wind wipes it clear:

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金属の霧にぶら下がって、風がそれを一掃する少し前に：

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Hanging in a metal mist, shortly before the wind wipes it out:

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風がそれを一掃する直前に、金属の霧にぶら下がっています：

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Just before the wind wipes it out, it's hanging in a metal mist:

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風がそれを一掃する直前に、それは金属の霧にぶら下がっています：

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Just before the wind wipes it out, it's hanging in a metal mist: