YOU SAID:

Hello, how are you? i wanted to ask you if you wanted to shave off al my hair

INTO JAPANESE

こんにちは お元気ですか？私の髪をすべて剃りたいかどうか尋ねたかった

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hello, how are you? I wanted to ask if you wanted to shave off all my hair.

INTO JAPANESE

こんにちは お元気ですか？私の髪をすべて剃りたいかどうか尋ねたかったのです。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hello, how are you? I wanted to ask if you wanted all my hair shaved off.

INTO JAPANESE

こんにちは お元気ですか？私の髪をすべて剃ってほしいかどうか聞きたかったのです。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hello, how are you? I wanted to ask if you would like me to shave off all my hair.

INTO JAPANESE

こんにちは お元気ですか？髪の毛を全部剃ってほしいかどうか聞きたかったのです。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hello, how are you? I wanted to ask if you wanted me to shave off all your hair.

INTO JAPANESE

こんにちは お元気ですか？髪の毛を全部剃ってほしいかどうか聞きたかったのです。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hello, how are you? I wanted to ask if you wanted me to shave off all your hair.