YOU SAID:

Hello, how are you today in this fine evening, lad?

INTO JAPANESE

こんにちは、今日の晴れた夜はどうですか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hello, What about the night it was sunny today?

INTO JAPANESE

こんにちは、今日は晴れた夜はどうですか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hello, What about the night it was sunny today?