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I don't believe Mr Yamashita had a very convincing conclusion in his essay.

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山下氏がエッセイであまり説得力のある結論を出したとは思えない。

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I don't think Mr. Yamashita drew a very convincing conclusion in his essay.

INTO JAPANESE

山下氏はエッセイであまり説得力のある結論を出したとは思えない。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I don't think Mr. Yamashita drew a very convincing conclusion in his essay.