YOU SAID:

I will not say the Day is done, nor bid the Stars farewell.

INTO JAPANESE

私はその日が終わったとは言いませんが、 星に別れを告げることもない。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I wouldn't say the day was over, I don't say goodbye to the stars.

INTO JAPANESE

私はその日が終わったとは言いませんが、 私は星に別れを告げません。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I wouldn't say the day was over, I don't say goodbye to the stars.