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im taking this horse by the reins making red coats redder with blood stains

INTO JAPANESE

血痕で赤いコートを赤くするレインでこの馬を取るim

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im taking this horse with a rain red coat with blood stains

INTO JAPANESE

血痕を伴う雨の赤いコートでこの馬を取るイム

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Im taking this horse in a rain red coat with bloodstains

INTO JAPANESE

私は血痕と雨の赤いコートでこの馬を取る

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I take this horse in a red coat of bloodstains and rain

INTO JAPANESE

私は血痕と雨の赤いコートでこの馬を取る

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I take this horse in a red coat of bloodstains and rain