YOU SAID:
It's nine o'clock on a Saturday. The regular crowd shuffles in. There's an old man setting next to me Making love to his tonic and gin.
INTO JAPANESE
土曜日の9時。いつもの客がぞろぞろと入ってくる。隣には老人が座り、トニックとジンを飲みながら愛し合っている。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
It's 9 o'clock on a Saturday and the usual crowd is trickling in. An old man sits next to me, making love over gin and tonic.
INTO JAPANESE
土曜日の9時、いつもの客が少しずつ集まってきた。年配の男性が私の隣に座り、ジン・トニックを飲みながら愛し合っていた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
It's 9pm on a Saturday and the usual crowd is trickling in. An older man sits next to me, sipping gin and tonics and making love.
INTO JAPANESE
土曜日の午後9時、いつもの客が少しずつ集まってきた。年配の男性が私の隣に座り、ジントニックを飲みながら愛し合っていた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
It's 9pm on a Saturday and the usual crowd is trickling in. An older man sits next to me, sipping gin and tonics and making love.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.