YOU SAID:

its my brithday today are you coming today with a present for me?

INTO JAPANESE

今日は私の誕生日です。今日は私へのプレゼントを持って来ますか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Today is my birthday. Would you like to bring me a present today?

INTO JAPANESE

今日は私の誕生日です。今日はプレゼントを持ってきてくれませんか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Today is my birthday. Will you bring me a present today?

INTO JAPANESE

今日は私の誕生日です。今日はプレゼントを持ってきてくれませんか。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Today is my birthday. Will you bring me a present today?