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My hopes evaporated as i saw the horse surge ahead

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私は前方に馬が急増するのを見て、私の希望は蒸発した

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I saw the horses surge forward, and my hopes evaporated

INTO JAPANESE

私は馬が前方に急増するのを見て、私の希望は蒸発した

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I saw the horse surge forward, and my hopes evaporated

INTO JAPANESE

私は馬が前方に急上昇するのを見て、私の希望は蒸発した

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I saw the horse soar forward, and my hopes evaporated

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私は馬が前方に舞い上がるのを見て、私の希望は蒸発した

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I saw the horse soar forward, and my hopes evaporated