YOU SAID:
My wife is the shining star in my heart, as she is so beautiful and kind.
INTO JAPANESE
私の妻は、彼女はとても美しく、親切な私の心に輝く星です。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
My wife, she is shining in my very beautiful and kind heart.
INTO JAPANESE
私の妻は、彼女は非常に美しく、親切な心の中で輝いています。
Come on, you can do better than that.