YOU SAID:

She always visited him except on fridays when she worked late, then she wanted to go out with her friends to a bar called The Scotsman

INTO JAPANESE

彼女はいつも金曜日を除いていつも彼を訪ねていました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

She always visited him except Friday.

INTO JAPANESE

彼女は金曜日以外はいつも彼を訪ねた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

She always visited him except Friday.