YOU SAID:

She smelled a bit like a dead fish, but after eating raw tuna, it was like returning home dead.

INTO JAPANESE

彼女は少し死んだ魚のような臭いがしましたが、生のマグロを食べた後だったので、まるで死んで家に帰ってきたようでした。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

She smelled a bit like dead fish, but she had just eaten raw tuna, so it was like she'd come home dead.

INTO JAPANESE

彼女は少し死んだ魚のような臭いがしましたが、生のマグロを食べたばかりだったので、まるで死んで家に帰ってきたかのようでした。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

She smelled a bit like dead fish, but she had just eaten some raw tuna so it was as if she had come home dead.

INTO JAPANESE

彼女は少し死んだ魚のような臭いがしましたが、生のマグロを食べたばかりだったので、まるで死んで家に帰ってきたかのようでした。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

She smelled a bit like dead fish, but she had just eaten some raw tuna so it was as if she had come home dead.