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the first sentence is supposed to grab the reader's attention

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最初の文は読者の注意をつかむことになって

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The first sentence is to grab the reader's attention

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最初の文は、読者の関心をつかむには

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To grab the reader's attention in the first sentence,

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最初の文で、読者の関心をつかむため

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To grab the reader's attention in the first sentence

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最初の文で、読者の関心をつかむため

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To grab the reader's attention in the first sentence