YOU SAID:

The first time you were able to get a job at the hospital was in September.

INTO JAPANESE

初めて病院に就職できたのは9月でした。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

It was September when I got my first job at a hospital.

INTO JAPANESE

初めて病院に就職したのは9月でした。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I started working at a hospital in September.

INTO JAPANESE

9月に病院で働き始めました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I started working at a hospital in September.