YOU SAID:

the roof came in and i died of blood loss

INTO JAPANESE

屋根が入り、失血で亡くなりました

BACK INTO ENGLISH

The roof entered and he died of blood loss

INTO JAPANESE

屋根が入り、彼は失血で死んだ

BACK INTO ENGLISH

The roof went in and he died of blood loss.

INTO JAPANESE

屋根が入り、彼は失血で死んだ。