YOU SAID:

when he said that I cried.

INTO JAPANESE

彼が私が泣いたと言ったとき。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When he said I cried.

INTO JAPANESE

彼が言ったとき、私は泣いた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I cried when he said.

INTO JAPANESE

彼が言ったとき、私は泣いた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I cried when he said.