YOU SAID:

i want to go to the carnival tonight, will you take me?

INTO JAPANESE

今夜はカーニバルに行きたいのですが、連れて行ってくれませんか。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I would like to go to the carnival tonight, but will you take me there?

INTO JAPANESE

私は今夜カーニバルに行きたいのですが、あなたは私をそこに連れて行きますか。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I want to go to the carnival tonight, will you take me there?

INTO JAPANESE

私は今夜カーニバルに行きたいのですが、あなたは私をそこへ連れて行きますか。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I want to go to the carnival tonight, will you take me there?