YOU SAID:
if i were to propose to you, would you accept my love and marry me?
INTO JAPANESE
もし私があなたにプロポーズしたら、私の愛を受け入れて結婚してくれますか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
If I propose to you, will you accept my love and marry me?
INTO JAPANESE
私があなたにプロポーズしたら、私の愛を受け入れて結婚してくれますか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
If I propose to you, will you accept my love and marry me?
That didn't even make that much sense in English.