YOU SAID:

my flannel shirt looked at me and cried out in disdain. I cant decipher the pronunciation of preface, am i saying it right?

INTO JAPANESE

私のネルシャツは私を見て、軽蔑して叫びました。まえがきの発音が聞き取れませんが、正しいと言っていますか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

My flannel shirt looked at me and looked down and shouted. I can't hear the pronunciation of the preface, but do you say it's correct?

INTO JAPANESE

私のネルシャツは私を見て、見下ろして叫んだ。まえがきの発音が聞こえませんが、正しいと思いますか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

My flannel shirt looked at me, looked down and shouted. I can't hear the pronunciation of the preface, do you think it's correct?

INTO JAPANESE

私のネルシャツは私を見て、見下ろして、叫びました。まえがきの発音が聞こえませんが、正しいと思いますか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

My flannel shirt looked at me, looked down and shouted. I can't hear the pronunciation of the preface, do you think it's correct?